Thursday, August 11, 2011

Which Is The Best Way To Describe This Character?

In my opinion you should use description two because most of the time people see that bad boy look and think trouble and this helps them see a different side. I also think that in description two you should change "a brand new, deep guilt" to "a deep guilt" because this guilt is supposed to be decades old not a brand new thing that just happened. It sounds like a great book. Good Luck!

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